Not bad. Although I agree with the comment on YouTube about the product placement fail at 0:33, LOL.
As a suggestion, when he touches the sun, and screams, I would add some spacious reverberation to the voice, as I think it would fit the feel a bit more.
answered Mar 02 '11 at 14:28
I kind of like it to be honest.
I think the effects look good. Maybe they need to be a little more "organic", but I think it looks good so far.
The editing tempo seems pretty good and the sound effects are nice. Just watch out you don't overdo the sound effects, because it might get a little annoying.
The footage is a little dark, but I think if you mess around with the contrast and brightness, it will look good.
It's a nice short. Very intriguing, keep it up! :)